Erika's Journal

Title: The Zoal Moons
Chapter: 1/8
Word count: ~980
Rating: PG13
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Ronon Dex, Teyla Emmagan. With Elizabeth Weir, Evan Lorne and Carson Beckett.
Genre: H/C, Gen, Team
Disclaimer: Stargate and all related characters are the property of MGM Television Entertainment.

Summary: The team’s mission fails miserably as they crash land on an apparently desert moon.

A/N: I'm going through my fics again. Don't worry, I didn't not change the plot or anything, it's just that I'm now A LOT better in English and I performed corrections. Grammar and spelling, the characterizations were also a bit off in some parts and I've discovered that my POVs and verb tenses were all over the place with some parts a little confusing, so I changed those too. Re-reading this made happily realize how much I've learned in one year. :) Thanks for everyone that had been kind on the reviews, because my writing sucked.