DW beta?

I need a beta for a Doctor Who ficlet I wrote. Well, it’s more of a meta. It’s supposed to be read as a file found in The Library concerning Gallifrey and the Doctor. I wrote it this week and already altered, edited and changed so many times it is very different from what I had written originally, XD. It evolved and transformed itself into the transcript file it is now. But I'm not familiar enough to the English language to know if it reads as one. It must be a bit awkward in some parts, but I wouldn't know where or how to fix it. I haven't read enough encyclopedias in English to know.